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In our continued pursuit of different poetry formats we take up the
Triolet. This poem is eight lines with repeated lines 1, 4 and 7 and
lines 2 and 8. Expressed in rhyme schemes they are: ABaAabAB with
capital letters for repeated lines.
Distractions*
Distractions stop you in your tracks
These things happen, though not planned.
Your children want to stop for snacks.
Distractions stop you in your tracks
The cell phone rings and yaks and yaks
You wait in line and stand and stand
Distractions stop you in your tracks
These things happen, though not planned.
Where’s That Fountain?*
Ponce de Leon may have let you down
For he never found the Fountain of Youth
So if wrinkles around your eyes abound
Ponce de Leon may have let you down
Now, if you see him please hound that clown
For we begin aging, and that’s the truth
Ponce de Leon may have let you down
For he never found the Fountain of Youth
Turning to a guest poet, our industrious, Reason A.
Poteet submitted this poem written in terzanelle format.
The Unbridled Path
by Reason A. Poteet
zigging and zagging home
my cohort well I know
zigging and zagging home
dragging my faith in tow
as one who snakes with pride
my cohort well I know
risky steps for this bride
each time I start to turn
as one who snakes with pride
on bent paths I can learn
to give my trust first place
each time I start to turn
God grants wisdom with grace
offers me strength to quit
to give my trust first place
urges me to admit
zigging and zagging home
offers me strength to quit
zigging and zagging home
She asked about punctuation and I replied: Punctuation and
capitalization, or their absence in poetry is the author’s
preference—with some exceptions, I suppose. I use commas for voice
inflection or pause when I feel they help in the reading.
Thank you, Sister Poteet, for regimenting your poetry in a
prescribed format.
Note—I use other people’s poems on occasion. If you would like
to have a poem considered for this column please send your best effort
to jetate@sbcglobal.net.
Show in the Subject space Poem submitted for Poetry Views.
Go with God and be blessed. James
*By James
E Tate
jetate@sbcglobal.net
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